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7. Zombie Nouns and Adjectives

7. Zombie Nouns and Adjectives

These are nouns and adjectives that lumber across the scene without a conscious agent directing their motion.

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2. Focusing On The Profession Instead Of The Subject

2. Focusing On The Profession Instead Of The Subject

Writers live in two universes. One is the world of the thing they study. The other is the world of their profession. Most of a researcher’s waking hours are spent in the second world, and it’s easy for him to confuse the two.

Example:

In recent years, an increasing number of psych...

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5. Clichés

5. Clichés

When a reader is forced to work through one stale idiom after another, she stops converting the language into mental images and slips back into just mouthing the words.

Examples:

Bread and butter

Coasting on its laurels

Renaissance man

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3. Misusing Quotation Marks

3. Misusing Quotation Marks

For example:

It began as a movement led by a few “young turks” against an “old guard” who dominated the profession.

Classic style is confident about its own voice. If you’re not comfortable using an expression without apologetic quotation marks, you probably shouldn’t be usin...

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6. Metaconcepts

6. Metaconcepts

Metaconcepts are ineffective because they are abstractions, which cannot be seen with the naked eye.

Could you recognize a “level” or a “perspective” if you met one on the street? Could you point it out to someone else? What about an approach, an assumption, a concept, a condition, a contex...

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Example 1:

I have serious doubts that trying to amend the Constitution would work on an actual level. On the aspirational level, however, a constitutional amendment strategy may be more valuable.

vs.

I doubt that trying to amend the Constitution would actually succeed, but it may ...

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Example 2:

What are the prospects for reconciling a prejudice reduction model of change, designed to get people to like one another more, with a collective action model of change, designed to ignite struggles to achieve intergroup equality?

vs.

Should we try to change society by r...

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Classic style is not the only way to write

But it’s an ideal that can pull writers away from many of their worst habits, and it works particularly well because it makes the unnatural act of writing seem like two of our most natural acts: talking and seeing.

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Zombie 1

Nominalization: turning a verb into a lifeless noun, by adding a suffix, e.g. –ance, –ment, –ation, or –ing.

Example:

Prevention of neurogenesis diminished social avoidance.

vs.

When we prevented neurogenesis, the mice no longer avoided ot...

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Zombie 2

Turning verbs into adjectives

Example:

It may be that some missing genes are more contributive to the spatial deficit.

vs.

Perhaps some missing genes contribute to the spatial deficit.

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4. Hedging

4. Hedging

This refers to the use of words such as:

virtually, almost, apparently, comparatively, fairly, in part, nearly, partially, predominantly, presumably, rather, relatively, seemingly, so to speak, somewhat, sort of, to a certain degree, to some extent, I would argue

Writers acqu...

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1. Signposting

1. Signposting

This refers to the habit of saying what you’re going to say, saying it, and then saying what you’ve said.

One way to introduce a topic without signposting is to open with a question. Observe the following example:

This chapter discusses the factors that cause names to rise and fal...

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8. Unnecessary Passive Voice

8. Unnecessary Passive Voice

The passive voice, when misused, can read like an evasive maneuver, take away urgency, or draw attention away from the subject.

Examples:

Extreme Exposure to CO may rapidly be fatal without producing significant warning symptoms.

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Generator exhaust contains...

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Style is the effective use of words to engage the human mind. Below are some common approaches that could be minimized to make your writing more effective and and engaging, whether that's fiction or non-fiction.

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