TIGHTEN IT UP YOUR WRITING
Things to avoid:
- Repeated or unnecessary words and sentence structures
- Reliance on dialogue to convey information to the reader
- Characters using each others' names repeatedly in dialogue
- Superfluous adverbs (he said angrily, she walked away quickly)
- Too many adjectives (the puffy, white, cotton candy clouds)
- Play-by-play-character movements that don't need to be included(picking things up, crossing rooms, standing and sitting, etc.)
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