3 Ways to Avoid Using Too Many Pronouns - Deepstash
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  1. Vary your sentence structure
  2. Combine sentences
  3. Have more agents

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3 Ways to Avoid Using Too Many Pronouns

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"Alex was breathing so hard that his chest was burning. He didn’t dare look over his shoulder as he ran. He just kept putting one foot in front of the other and hoped he wouldn’t trip. He was still...

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"Alex was breathing so hard that his chest was burning. He didn’t dare look over his shoulder as he ran. He just kept putting one foot in front of the other and hoped he wouldn’t trip. He was still...

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Remove the filter words and give the environment some agency.

"Alex was breathing so hard that his chest was burning. The rich smell of soil rose up from the forest floor, which was cool and ...

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